What can I improve on YT?

I started YouTube a few days ago and would like to upload Fortnite there. I have already cut two highlight videos and wanted to know what can be improved because I hardly get any feedback. PS: Shouldn't be a promo move nobody has to subscribe or like.

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Maybe ditch the weird noises. Like the one from discord

OK I just don't know how to do it but.

Just record the game sound

Hi

Would make the transitions a bit softer. Maybe music with more tension. However, please always look for copyright. Otherwise you will quickly run into problems with YouTube.

Yes, I clip that with Nvidia experience

OK thanks