How do you like my lyrics for my hit (rap) (fortnite)?

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- in V-Bucks
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It's about me flexing with V-Bucks in Fortnite. Here is the text I have so far:

[Intro]

I just spent 200k Vbucks with Visa card haha

I even flex in Fortnite, yes, ey, yes, ey, ey

[Hook]

Flex with Vbucks (yes)

Flex with Vbucks (uh)

Flex with Vbucks (ah)

Flex with Vbucks (skrr)

Flex with Vbucks (ey)

Flex with Vbucks

Flex with Vbucks

100k with the visa (haha)

Flex with Vbucks (yes)

Flex with Vbucks (uh)

Flex with Vbucks (ah)

Flex with Vbucks (skrr)

Flex with Vbucks (ey)

Flex with Vbucks

Flex with Vbucks

200k on the visa (visa)

[Part]

Pay with Visa

On the road with purple (500)

Yes I'm a dealer (yes)

Smoke sativa

You are a nobody (haha)

I'm a beast yes (beast)

Count only purple (skrrr)

Sip only purple (lean, lean)

Then the hook again

How do you like the text? Is he good if not where could I improve him?

Ti

Fortnite is cringe, at least if you want to specify it. Real gangsters do not talk about Fortnite.

And then the indication with the V-Bucks - you have to realize that this is absolutely ridiculous.

Also, the text is pretty simple, if not primitive.

Focus on serious issues that are not ridiculous. Fortnite can be mentioned in a subordinate clause, but you know yourself from which people the community consists - mainly as kiddies. No suitable place for gangsters.

Do not let that discourage you! If you practice enough and give everything, you can beat out a steady song one day!

ch

Diggah you are violently bustling n track on YouPorn or YouTube haha.

(I'm serious)

mo

That is "everything will be fine" by bushido

Ma

That was still rap.

Na

HONOR Brother HONOR

Ar

I do not know where this nonsense comes from, that this or that community consists only of kiddies…

Ra

Like all this rap from today.

Mhhh I would say that there's still a lot of meaning.

Juse Ju feat. Danger Dan - propaganda
Attended Masculine - Plattenbau O.S.T.
Lemur - Highlander
Contra K - More than a job
Hopsin (Ill Mind of Hopsin)
Kendrick Lamar - M.A.A.D. City
Kamikazes - Grand Hotel Abyss
Sookee - Bouncy Castle
OK KID - Good people
Childish Gambino - This is America

At least they would come to me right away ^^

Rap name Bushido? la laborer
Hip hop rap with loud bass? ma matteoCollin
Fortnite 200? Ga Gatlinnathalia
Is aimot legal in Fortnite? Su SupermarketAmira