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The game that devours the time and money of our youth. The online game Fortnite dominates the free time of 10-18 year olds. It's free, pulls the money from the teenagers' pockets. It makes 2.5 billion francs of sales per year. The entire game industry is growing massively worldwide.

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Since it does not exist anymore, it sounds funny.

The game that devoured the time and money of our youth. The online game Fortnite dominated the free time of 10- to 18-year-olds, it was free and it pulled the money out of the teenagers' pocket, making it worth 2.5 billion francs a year. Industry has grown massively worldwide!

→ I also changed the text a little bit… So I would stop it👌🏼

Thank you nice. But I do not have to give anything. I was just bored and I wanted to see how people take unnecessary time for me.

Oh! For me, it was still a good exercise 😂