YouTube title?

I'm doing YT videos and I just wanted to ask if this title sounds good:

The 12 worst hackers in Fortnite history!

Well I hate fortnite but I want to help you anyway I think it's good but I think it sounds like iwie wrong I would rather put something like the 12 worst hacker in the history of fortnite

I do not know jz in german super well and do not know which sentence jz is right or wrong, you just look for what you find nicer

Sounds like a common title to me, is not really creative or individual.